Wyvern's CMDR Application

Accepted
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1) What is your in-game name? Wyvern
2) What is your discord name? The Prophet Of Dissapointment#6672
3) How long have you been apart of the community? not tlong i got invited by Dan Diablos himself
4) What commander position are you applying for? 501st
5) Why did you choose this battalion? 
I wanted to go for shock because i have never  been shock co before but since shock has been taken i am going for 501st i have been 501st Commander XO etc many times.
By this point it feels like a old employment job i know the ins and outs of being  501st co 
6) Do you know the lore of this battalion if so explain?
yes i know the lore the lore is:The 501st was a clone trooper legion of clones that was an attack legion they were deployed to the worst battle fields in the galaxy. Their leader CT-7567 “rex” feld when he had been promoted to Commander for the assault of mandalore and assisted the escape of a Jedi that was helping them. After Operation Knightfall and the production of clones had stopped and they had been replaced by the human Stormtroopers all clones were transferred to Vader’s Fist where Vader could command them seeing he only wanted the best. This is in legends but is still badass During the assault of Kashyyyk the home would of the wookies when Vader was hunting Jedi and slaughtering Wookiees to find them Some of the Wookies where ascaping so Commander Appo the leader of Vader's fist at the time asked Vader to orbital bombarded their escape when Vader and the 501st where still on the ground. But another notable thing is when they boarded the tantive-4 to capture Princess Leia and the death star plans. Another one is when Commander Vill and a part of the 501st came and saved Vader’s life on the orders of the emperor when he was hunting jedi.
7) What commander positions have you been in other servers?
Since i have been playing gmod for quite a while now i am just gonna list a couple of things i have been:
GA
CT/ST MCO
501st MCO
RC MCO
41st/scout CMDR
Shock XO
Pilot Commander and xo
(Note: on the spots where i was commander i got xo aswell)
8) Why should we choose you over other applicants?
Well i am not gonna brag but like i said 501st feels more like a old workplace/old friend/old home i return to and show respect to for being there for me
If i get chosen for the spot you will have someone who has alot of experience i dont really start any drama.
because honestly i cba to fight with someone over such petty stuff if i have to work with someone i work with that person if i like him or not
9) Can you create a training document and a roster within 72 hours? YES
10) Do you agree that asking about your application can get it denied? I AGREE
11) Do you agree that you will make sure to get everything done for your battalion? I AGREE
12) Please sign your in-game name, if you understand the applicable rules and terms: Sincerely, Wyvern

please update this to fit the Imperial RP template, otherwise, I'd also like to see more about how you would run the battalion you decide to go with.
shock is currently taken for the CO spot, you can either talk to Ozzel about becoming his 2IC or you can change what regiment you wanna become CO for.

 

Hello, Wyvern.

Pros
1) Experience - You have experience which is great

Cons
1) Misunderstanding - You're applying for Shock or 501st? You don't really make it clear as Question 4 states you are going for 501st whilst Question 5 states you are going for Shock? Additionally; you also wrote information regarding 501st as a Clone Legion and not Imperial. 

2)  Lack of effort - When applying, you are supposed to display the best of yourself and this application seems fairly rushed and lacks detail.

Overall

I'm afraid it is going to have be a -1 for me due to the reasons stated above. 

Hey, Marshall 

in this message i want to explain my thought process so the people and you understand it
Thank you for the feedback
Point 1:

i am applying for 501st but first i wanted to apply for shock i posted my previous application in the clone wars section on accident where i applied for shock but a second after i posted shock was taken thats why i put in what i did

Point 2: In my opinion you may not agree with me but thats fine everyone is entitled to their opinion but i think applications arent the most reliable things to read people can just write random stuff and turn out not as good as they put in their application (and also i am really bad at writing apps) i think that someone should show their skills in action instead of the application it may look like i didnt put effort in but i did i just suck at writing them.

also on your pinbt on the lore of the battalion: this battalion is a little bit different the 501st became well known in the clone wars but in imperial they didnt really do anything standing out apart from hunting jedi and fighting with vader against the cis remnant

Anyways thanks for the reply i appreciate the feedback just wanted to explain my thought process

Cheers sincerely, Wyvern

 

after review of your application and your reply to marshall i decided to give you a chance as 501st Commanding officer, you can message me regarding your interview.
Accepted

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